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Re: The Hunt [in action]
Querp Querp trotted to the nearest seamstress shop, his long feet slapping the pavement. He tucked his numb ears up into his hat, which he knew wouldn't warm them at ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: The Hunt [in action]
Querp Querp sniffed at the molded piece of bread. He scratched at the blue puffs of fuzz with a thin claw, which promptly popped off and fell onto the pavement. ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: The Hunt [in action]
Name: Querp (no last name) Gender: male Age: 151 (still very young for an imp) Description of Appearance and Picture: Approximately four feet high with a rather greenish complexion. His ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Picture of Shroom Forest I Drew in German Class
Das ist sehr hübsch. :) Does your German teacher know that you draw in class? ;) I wonder what this would look like with a little colour. Not completely coloured, ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Welcome my fellow musicians
What instrument do you play, Matthewmazer? I don't play any band instruments. Is the club for orchestra and choir as well? I'm a cellist, pianist, and vocalist. :) Apparently, we ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Fighting for Justice
Wow. Those are really big blades. ;) I love the different shapes and details you added to the swords. I can't find anything to critique on the boy...he looks good ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Anime Boy Head
Hi, Sheepy! I love his expression. :D I like the way you coloured his eye with the highlight and everything. Also, you added more dimension to it that just colouring ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Hello People. =D
:smt039 Hi, Shawn. (I have a character named Shawn. :) I love that name.) Welcome to YWS. :elephant: You might enjoy the storybook section of YWS. It's a kind of ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
Hey, tigershark! :D I loved the concept and message of this piece. You've managed to explain an emotion in a new and original way. I can only say I hope ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: My Father was Buried
Hello. :) I really enjoyed this. You had a wonderful blend of humour and seriousness that's hard to accomplish (for me anyway). Your dialogue seemed very natural for the characters, ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: The Wizard's Thief - Contest Entry? (Part Two)
(So, this is the second part. For some reason, I don't like it as much as the first part. I can't figure out why, though. Please let me know if ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 2 (unknown title)
Hello, Muffin. :) I like how you twist to a different POV. :D I would write at the top, center who the speaker is in each chapter. I like this ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Hello Everyone!
:smt039 Welcome to the site! I'm Sea. :) I recognize your avatar, but I can't place it. Who is it? As DreamWalker said, we're all a bunch of friendly folks, ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Place Review Orders Here
:elephant: Sea's Reviews :elephant: Walk-ins Welcome Okay, so I'm finally open for requests. :smt003 Just know that during the school year, your review will more than likely not come until ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Konichiwa! :3
Hi, Jenn! :smt039 I like the number two as well, but my favourite is three. Don't ask me why. :D Ew! I hate crickets, too. Especially when you can here ...
Jul 17, 2011
